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Tortured Phoenix
A tortured soul who is rising from the ashes
Het stories 
11th-Sep-2012 03:55 pm
Avengers - CN - Not Superheroes
Can someone teach me how to write a het sex scene that is sweet and loving? Slow and ssensual without being boring?

I can do frantic and hot but not sweet and loving :-(
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11th-Sep-2012 03:10 pm (UTC)
http://www.literotica.com/storyxs/writ_stor.shtml

Under 'ESSAYS AND HOW-TO'S' you can find A LOT of stuff. Maybe there is something, which can help you.

And why doing sweet and loving, when one can do it frantic? o.O ;)
11th-Sep-2012 04:59 pm (UTC)
Thanks dude, dunno if the link helped or the fact I changed from her to his perspective but it seems to be working out now.

And I will write the frantic and hot stuff later, this is just a sweet little bit to show how much they care about each other. The hot stuff will be at the end :-)

11th-Sep-2012 06:34 pm (UTC)
good girl ^^
and are there snippets for the nosey reader? =D
11th-Sep-2012 06:47 pm (UTC)
Lol, the whole thing will probably be posted in a few days. It's a clint/nat avengers story for my hc bingo prompt comforting someone :-)
11th-Sep-2012 08:00 pm (UTC)
I reeeeally don't dig het stuff, but i reeeeeally dig Clint. You really should let have him some fun one day ^^
11th-Sep-2012 08:05 pm (UTC)
I just can't seem to ship him with anyone but Nat, I dunno why, I see all the slash potential in Avengers but I never seem to read or write it.
12th-Sep-2012 06:56 am (UTC)
tststs... But patience is a virtue ^^
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